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Monday, March 16, 2020

My sestina

We have been writing poems today, they were fun to make... we had to base it on two cards that someone else wrote, a Journey / Haerenga and a Path / Ara. 
Here is what mine turned out like 😊


My Sestina
Journey / Haerenga
Become a great and talented artist
Path / Ara
Patience, hard work, practice, skills and sacrifice


Something you saw.
I saw lots of famous celebrities. 
Something you remember.
Every day I practiced so extremely hard.
A person who was with you
Selena Gomez was right next to me.
A wonderfully imagined thing that didn’t actually happen.
I met my most favorite celebrity.
The reason for your journey.
So I can achieve my dream.
Your own six-word sentence.

This took patience and hard work.

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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 27, 2020 at 2:24 PM

    Kia ora Greer
    This is a great poem. I didn't know you liked Selena Gomaz. I like her music and have really enjoyed watching her on the James Cordon Carpool karaoke.
    https://www.google.com/search?safe=strict&ei=XFV9XougCb3G4-EPi62kqAc&q=james+corden+carpool+karaoke+with+selena+gomez&oq=james+corden+carpool+karaoke+with+Selena+&gs_l=psy-ab.1.0.0i22i30j0i333l3.9833.12843..15569...0.0..0.283.3163.0j9j6......0....1..gws-wiz.......0i67j0.qJsh4MZxOwM
    Looking forward to reading some of your posts during the lockdown Greer!
    Mrs Pascoe

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  2. AnonymousMarch 27, 2020 at 2:25 PM

    Sorry Greer if you cut and paste this into google it will take you to the clip. It's really funny. Mrs P

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    1. AnonymousApril 13, 2020 at 2:06 PM

      That video his hilarious, thanks Mrs Pascoe.
      I was reading the newsletter on the marshland site and it sounds like you're being very amused by Beau 😂, I can't wait to see you at school hopefully very soon.😊👍
      bye, Stay safe!

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    2. AnonymousApril 15, 2020 at 4:26 PM

      Yes Beau is so funny! he has such an amazing imagination and makes all sorts of stuff up!! he has a beautiful little sister called Maeve. They are both super cute!
      Stay safe and well . Mrs P

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